Christopher,
I think you did a great job! I think this is a good starting place for people trying to improve their nutrition, but I think people with disease or illness will need to go an extra mile or two 'out of the box'. Your book reads so well, and is the first I feel I can honestly recommend to friends who just want to get onto a better eating plan. I have not felt that way about others that either read like they are in a rush to get to print for financial agenda, with many typos, poor grammar, not enough literature references, read like a Sally Fallon commercial, or have supplements for all to purchase. It's like every book there is something worth taking, but enough not so worthy that I don't want to share with my family or friends.
I like your writing style, passion, and humility. I hope you stay that way for any future works you complete! You are an effective communicator, and will be well received, I think. I think for today, and for the general population that is not ill, but wanting to improve nutrition you've provided a great resource composite, thus eliminating the daunting task of doing all that research that you have done. I think your book can bring many people to square one, maybe like AV did for a lot people here.
I think most of us here have done plenty of 'research' on our own bodies, so there is plenty of (hopefully constructive!) criticism coming your way.
Congratulations, and best wishes to you!